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Post by missmcgrory on Nov 2, 2011 15:15:48 GMT
Can everyone please leave their notes on Rafferty or the Man in Denim as a reply to this message!
Thank you!
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Post by scotttaylor on Nov 2, 2011 16:45:55 GMT
The man in denim
Denim-dressed
looked nasty-hard
long black hair
fidgety drinker
a board pitted face
hard face
cheeky “you had a pint right enough but ah felt like it so ah drank it”
Thief “he stole the big man’s drink”
I think Mcllvanney made this guy out to be a men who liked to stat fights and he made us fell like the man deserved what he got .
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Post by alexander on Nov 2, 2011 16:46:10 GMT
Man in denim
Denim-dressed
Looked nasty hard
A broad pitted face framed in long black hair
Fidgety drinker
Eyes were a demonstration
One of those who keep looking over both shoulders
Someone the barman didn’t like
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Post by owengowans on Nov 2, 2011 17:03:09 GMT
Man in denim. At the bar
Man in denim, denim dressed, long black hair, fidgety drinker, looked nasty_hard, broad pitted face, one of those who keep looking over there shoulders as if they knew somebody must be trying to take a liberty, hard faced, cheeky and thief
I think mclivanney want to make us awair that the man in denim is someone looking for a
fight as know one would steel somones pint and not expext to get beat up for the theft.
Also I thinK the man in denim deserved what was done to him.
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Post by Alana Campbell on Nov 2, 2011 17:16:47 GMT
:D "He is a fidgety drinker , he'd just started coming in and the barman did'nt like him. he had long black hair . he was for ever looking over his sholder as if he was trying to keep some thing hidden and didnt want any one to see it. he keped glancing over at rafferty(the big man). and was getting annoyed at the facted he wasnt getting a respons. to me he seemed cockie and waiting to start a fight .
sorry man in demnom :-X
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Post by charles campbell on Nov 2, 2011 17:45:59 GMT
 man in denim somebody the bar man did not like looked nasty-hard framed in long black hair fidgety drinker one of thoughs who keep looking over both sholders as if some one must be trying to take a liberty
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Post by lorishort on Nov 2, 2011 17:49:58 GMT
Man in Denim
1. nasty-hard
2.broad pitted face.
3.long black hair
4.fidgety drinker
5.hard faced
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Post by sarahmcculloch on Nov 6, 2011 10:09:00 GMT
Man in Denim
long black hair
nasty-hard
figety drinker
broad pitted face.
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Post by liamholland on Nov 7, 2011 23:18:26 GMT
The man in Denium
(Denium Dressed he looked nasty-hard).
(a broad pitted face framed in long black hair).
(fidgety drinker).
(one of those who kept looking over both shoulders as if somebody must be
trying to take a liberty and they,re determind to catch him at it).
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Post by liam houston on Nov 8, 2011 17:10:03 GMT
the man in denim;
figgity drinker
wears denim
broad-pitted face
long black hair
nervous (he kepps looking over his shoulder)
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Post by Heather Reid on Nov 8, 2011 19:23:17 GMT
Rafferty Ill fitting suit He seemed uncertain Looks ill Bones were sharp Chill and relaxed Not afraid Sarcastic Mouth was taut He seemes uncartain to what he wanted  |
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Post by Alma Mujkanovic on Nov 8, 2011 19:30:32 GMT
"Ill fitted suit"
"it was too big for him"
"he could have come back to it after a long illness"
The charcoal gray cloth sat on him loosely"
"seemed uncertain"
"like a small boy in a sweety-shop"
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Post by aaronmaason on Nov 8, 2011 23:10:45 GMT
rafferty:
ill fitting suit, suit was slightly out of fashion yet looked quite new and it was to big for him, his face looked as it had just come off a whetstone, the cheek bones were sharp, the mouth was tout, the eyes were preoccupied with there own thoughts. He wants us to feel that rafferty is a very intimidating and hard character. We know this because of the descriptive words he uses.
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Post by catherine mcphillips on Nov 9, 2011 19:10:46 GMT
The man in denim
Denim-dressed
looked nasty-hard
long black hair
fidgety drinker
a board pitted face
hard face
cheeky “you had a pint right enough but ah felt like it so ah drank it”
Thief “he stole the big man’s drink”
I think Mcllvanney made this guy out to be a men who liked to stat fights and he made us fell like the man deserved what he got .
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Post by Jodie Whyte on Nov 9, 2011 20:06:36 GMT
MAN IN DENIM
dressed in Denim
llooks hard and nasty
Black hair
fidgety drinker
a board pitted face
hard face
cheeky “you had a pint right enough but ah felt like it so ah drank it”
Thief “he stole the big man’s drink”
I think Mcllvanney made this guy out to be a guy who would start a fight on anything he could think of and he made us fell like the man deserved what happened to him.
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man in denim