Post by stephenmcrae on Jun 17, 2013 18:49:16 GMT
Short story
Stephen McRae
As he clambered along the rocky landscape, his small feet smacking against the rocks, he could hear the roaring and crashing of the waves and the caw of the seagull that glided along above his head. As he explored the caves and rock pools he saw a glint of light shining at the bottom of the pool. His tiny arm reached down and cupped the fragile jar in his delicate fingers. He took a closer look, running his fingers along intricate design covering the jar. As he sauntered back to his parents, he started imagining where the jar might have come from. It looked like pirates treasure that had been washed ashore. As he reached the golden sand dunes where his mum was sitting he shouted “Look! I’ve found some treasure”. His mum didn’t take much notice of him. Instead she just nodded and smiled. He ventured further into the sand dunes, the grass grabbing at his feet, trying to trip him up. He stumbled, dropping the glass jar. It rolled away down the down the dune through the grass. He frantically ran after it, scraping his feet on the prickly thorns. As he finally reached the bottom with cuts and splinters on his feet. He saw the jar roll down and into a rabbit hole. He knelt down and felt around to try and find it, he couldn’t. Distraught, he ran back through the prickly thorns and long sharp grass, along the winding sandy paths back to his mum. He rummaged through his backpack and pulled out his spade and ran back to the rabbit hole. He began excavating the hole digging down about five inches. He finally uncovered the jar brushing off the mud and the sand. It was this time two hundred years earlier that a Victorian boy the same age had lost this jar on a day out from London with his family. His initials had been carved in bottom as his birthday present from his father on his travels throughout the world, but clueless of all this the young boy slipped it into a small pocket on the front of his backpack taking it home and placing it on the mantelpiece in the living room. The family lived there lives taking know notice of the jar worth millions of pounds, sitting gathering dust in their home.
Stephen McRae
As he clambered along the rocky landscape, his small feet smacking against the rocks, he could hear the roaring and crashing of the waves and the caw of the seagull that glided along above his head. As he explored the caves and rock pools he saw a glint of light shining at the bottom of the pool. His tiny arm reached down and cupped the fragile jar in his delicate fingers. He took a closer look, running his fingers along intricate design covering the jar. As he sauntered back to his parents, he started imagining where the jar might have come from. It looked like pirates treasure that had been washed ashore. As he reached the golden sand dunes where his mum was sitting he shouted “Look! I’ve found some treasure”. His mum didn’t take much notice of him. Instead she just nodded and smiled. He ventured further into the sand dunes, the grass grabbing at his feet, trying to trip him up. He stumbled, dropping the glass jar. It rolled away down the down the dune through the grass. He frantically ran after it, scraping his feet on the prickly thorns. As he finally reached the bottom with cuts and splinters on his feet. He saw the jar roll down and into a rabbit hole. He knelt down and felt around to try and find it, he couldn’t. Distraught, he ran back through the prickly thorns and long sharp grass, along the winding sandy paths back to his mum. He rummaged through his backpack and pulled out his spade and ran back to the rabbit hole. He began excavating the hole digging down about five inches. He finally uncovered the jar brushing off the mud and the sand. It was this time two hundred years earlier that a Victorian boy the same age had lost this jar on a day out from London with his family. His initials had been carved in bottom as his birthday present from his father on his travels throughout the world, but clueless of all this the young boy slipped it into a small pocket on the front of his backpack taking it home and placing it on the mantelpiece in the living room. The family lived there lives taking know notice of the jar worth millions of pounds, sitting gathering dust in their home.