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Post by mrsanderson on Oct 30, 2010 14:16:03 GMT
Excellent news, David! See, you were being very pessimistic; a 2 on your first credit paper is excellent! Also, only 2 marks away from a 1. Everyone else has worked very hard too. Have a great weekend all!  |
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Post by meggiemoo13 on Nov 5, 2010 21:24:51 GMT
Will we get our close reading marks back? |
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Post by mrsanderson on Nov 7, 2010 13:13:00 GMT
You will indeed! Either tomorrow or Tuesday. Hope you've had a good weekend! |
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Post by meggiemoo13 on Nov 21, 2010 18:46:33 GMT
This is what i've got so far, is it okay?  Attachments:
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scott
March Hare
smoking doesn't just damage you it also damages the people around you so don't smoke
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Post by scott on Nov 21, 2010 19:41:04 GMT
Rober ti'm now on proboards to
ha ha ha
come and see the Gang show
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scott
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smoking doesn't just damage you it also damages the people around you so don't smoke
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Post by scott on Nov 21, 2010 19:44:10 GMT
to find out more on the Gang Show got to the "please regester me" bit and look at my posts ;D
you know you want to
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Post by amyferguson26 on Dec 7, 2010 16:29:47 GMT
hi miss davidson! Just wondering, does the essay have to be finished by wednesday?
Thanks!
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Post by mrsanderson on Dec 7, 2010 19:34:56 GMT
Hi Amy! I gave you your essays home not really knowing when I'd next see you, so I didn't give you a deadline, and for that I am sorry. It does not have to be done for tomorrow; we'll set a deadline for Friday. I'll have them marked and back to you for the next Friday, and then redrafting should commence! We'll have to leave 'Dulce et Decorum Est' (our next unit - a poem) for after the holidays I think. Snow is not our friend! |
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Post by amyferguson26 on Dec 7, 2010 21:37:23 GMT
okay! Thanks!
I agree, snow is definitely not our friend!
:-)
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Post by rhysarthur on Dec 8, 2010 19:16:14 GMT
Miss i neeeed help
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Post by mrsanderson on Dec 8, 2010 20:42:35 GMT
Can you be more specific? I'll try to help you if I can!
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Post by rhysarthur on Dec 12, 2010 21:00:16 GMT
wheen are yoou gonna post up the conclusion
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Post by mrsanderson on Dec 13, 2010 14:11:20 GMT
Okay folks, If you are finished everything on the planner then you are to write the rest yourselves. You should be able to do this easily; follow the same format as you did for the preceding paragraphs (Point, Evidence, Explanation). For the conclusion, we made up the following in class: To conclude/ In conclusion, it is clear that Michelle Magorian has portrayed the progression of Tom and Willie's relationship effectively through her use of characterisation. Their development is shown most effectively when... Hope this helps - let me know if you need anything else |
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Post by Megan D on Dec 13, 2010 18:26:57 GMT
I'm stuck again ....  And i'm only on their relationship at the beginning!!!! at this rate i'll never be finished....  |
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Post by mrsanderson on Dec 14, 2010 15:36:30 GMT
Right, Megan. What we'll do is sit tomorrow while people are reading and go over what you have so far. I need to know specifically what you're stuck on. Is it the structure? I know that you know the plot of the story very well, and how the relationship develops.
Don't worry - do what you can and we'll go over it tomorrow.
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And i'm only on their relationship at the beginning!!!! at this rate i'll never be finished.... 