Post by shona on Jan 12, 2012 19:10:51 GMT
Just in case anyone was off and wanted annotated notes 
+ sorry for small spelling errors 
Hawking Roosting the Poem
I sit in the top of the wood, my eyes closed. Metaphors suggesting not just height top of the food chain top hierarchy no worries untouchable
Inaction, no falsifying dream Suggest even though the hawk is apparently not doing anything we shouldn’t believe that it is simple doing nothing even in sleep it praising it killing technique
Between my hooked head and hooked feet: repeating hook to show hawk like a hook a simple weapon rasher sharp , hooked used h sound swishing though the air and in to the body of it pray dramatic sound of hawks talons and colliding violently with a k sound into its prey’s bones.
Or in sleep rehearse perfect kills and eat. In sleep rehearing his killing times always used time effectually
The convenience of the high tree! High in socity
The air buoyancy and the sun’s ray
Are of advantages to me;
And the earth face upward for my inspection although he is a in charge marshal contusions
Are lists to emphasize all the advantages to him likes the advangaes to people in power (dictatorys)
My feet are locked upon the rough bark locked dominate
It took the whole of Creation
To produce my foot, my each feather
Showing Vainty and self centred nature as he suggest it took the most time in creashion to create him
Now I hold Creation in my foot the branch stand for Mother Nature and now he is trapping it is although he is trapping alouth he has power over it like god
Or fly are locked upon the rough bark
I kill, where I please because it is all mine
There is no sophistry in my body:
My manners are tearing off heads
Arrogance repression of I ,mine extra
Imagine of a hawk moving around the world self centred alothough he has the power of a god to move plants
Childish" all mine" creating a dislike to like person this
and less repect for his veiw
No extraction in his body although he thinks he looks so magnificent that people would think he would was fake because he is so perfect
Manners are to be nice to people so have equal respect ect but he feels he doesn’t not need this as animals are just for killing like people are mean to oppressed and ordered about tearing violent nature
“My manners suggesting positive qualities and trading people with respect .He delights that he has no civilised qualities and this is highlighting by the juxtaposition are tearing off heads
The allotment of death- control over own path of ground and killing in the area the choosing of death
For the one path of my flight is direct –There is one path of flight of which he will deside add to the idea of him being controlloing
Through the bones of the living image of him swift ploughing through violent vicious person he kills animal to survives brutal
No arguments assert my right: no argument he in control doesn’t need to justifies
The sun is behind me. Relating back to sun suggesting time has past but he is still in control
Nothing has changed since I began.- manifesto of no change unlike politician to change things for the better the hawk unveils it plans for no change
My eye has permitted no change. - He has watched over because of him ruler an example of metonymy- one feature to describe something the eye not let anyone step out of line short simple and statement of facts.
I am going to keep things like this. Will keep them the same because he is happy with his poison in life
Egotistical- Care too much for their appearance self obsessed don’t think of other
Violent – Human will do any thing to get what it want violent to head strong like animals
Megalomaniac – power crazy like a Tarrant ruling controlling no has a right but him he is the begin and end
No sophistry suggest he is not sophist he has only one function that he is perfect at he has no need of extra frills of feature. They would only detract from his perfection
I kill where I please because it is all mine he has power of life and death he believes he owns even the creates in his kingdom
His land in which he decided how lives and who dies god or a decorated and no new thing can happen nothing can grow like no new ideas in a decorated ship
+ sorry for small spelling errors 
Hawking Roosting the Poem
I sit in the top of the wood, my eyes closed. Metaphors suggesting not just height top of the food chain top hierarchy no worries untouchable
Inaction, no falsifying dream Suggest even though the hawk is apparently not doing anything we shouldn’t believe that it is simple doing nothing even in sleep it praising it killing technique
Between my hooked head and hooked feet: repeating hook to show hawk like a hook a simple weapon rasher sharp , hooked used h sound swishing though the air and in to the body of it pray dramatic sound of hawks talons and colliding violently with a k sound into its prey’s bones.
Or in sleep rehearse perfect kills and eat. In sleep rehearing his killing times always used time effectually
The convenience of the high tree! High in socity
The air buoyancy and the sun’s ray
Are of advantages to me;
And the earth face upward for my inspection although he is a in charge marshal contusions
Are lists to emphasize all the advantages to him likes the advangaes to people in power (dictatorys)
My feet are locked upon the rough bark locked dominate
It took the whole of Creation
To produce my foot, my each feather
Showing Vainty and self centred nature as he suggest it took the most time in creashion to create him
Now I hold Creation in my foot the branch stand for Mother Nature and now he is trapping it is although he is trapping alouth he has power over it like god
Or fly are locked upon the rough bark
I kill, where I please because it is all mine
There is no sophistry in my body:
My manners are tearing off heads
Arrogance repression of I ,mine extra
Imagine of a hawk moving around the world self centred alothough he has the power of a god to move plants
Childish" all mine" creating a dislike to like person this
and less repect for his veiw
No extraction in his body although he thinks he looks so magnificent that people would think he would was fake because he is so perfect
Manners are to be nice to people so have equal respect ect but he feels he doesn’t not need this as animals are just for killing like people are mean to oppressed and ordered about tearing violent nature
“My manners suggesting positive qualities and trading people with respect .He delights that he has no civilised qualities and this is highlighting by the juxtaposition are tearing off heads
The allotment of death- control over own path of ground and killing in the area the choosing of death
For the one path of my flight is direct –There is one path of flight of which he will deside add to the idea of him being controlloing
Through the bones of the living image of him swift ploughing through violent vicious person he kills animal to survives brutal
No arguments assert my right: no argument he in control doesn’t need to justifies
The sun is behind me. Relating back to sun suggesting time has past but he is still in control
Nothing has changed since I began.- manifesto of no change unlike politician to change things for the better the hawk unveils it plans for no change
My eye has permitted no change. - He has watched over because of him ruler an example of metonymy- one feature to describe something the eye not let anyone step out of line short simple and statement of facts.
I am going to keep things like this. Will keep them the same because he is happy with his poison in life
Egotistical- Care too much for their appearance self obsessed don’t think of other
Violent – Human will do any thing to get what it want violent to head strong like animals
Megalomaniac – power crazy like a Tarrant ruling controlling no has a right but him he is the begin and end
No sophistry suggest he is not sophist he has only one function that he is perfect at he has no need of extra frills of feature. They would only detract from his perfection
I kill where I please because it is all mine he has power of life and death he believes he owns even the creates in his kingdom
His land in which he decided how lives and who dies god or a decorated and no new thing can happen nothing can grow like no new ideas in a decorated ship