Post by missmcgrory on Apr 7, 2014 11:49:10 GMT
Jee Young,
Another excellent piece of work. I've given it an 18 (A).
Comments:
Excellent introduction
Clearly marked, effective structure
Specific examples of film language to support points
Lots of detailed analysis – excellent. This is a particular strength.
Personal response with clear evaluative stance
Overall, ‘thorough and precise’.
I know you don't have a physical copy of the essay to revise from over the holidays, but you can use your notes and the detailed plan you made.
Have a lovely holiday and I'll see you on the first day back!
Miss McGrory
Another excellent piece of work. I've given it an 18 (A).
Comments:
Excellent introduction
Clearly marked, effective structure
Specific examples of film language to support points
Lots of detailed analysis – excellent. This is a particular strength.
Personal response with clear evaluative stance
Overall, ‘thorough and precise’.
I know you don't have a physical copy of the essay to revise from over the holidays, but you can use your notes and the detailed plan you made.
Have a lovely holiday and I'll see you on the first day back!
Miss McGrory
